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    October 23

    Lost in her words

    They rush by , the wind chasing the very echo of their run.  
    She smiles, time stops, I listen.
    The air gets damp and heavy, my breathing slows down, the rythm of air going in and a exhale mesmerizes the moment.
    Her words sound cripsly in my mind, her lips dancing about,
    her eyes shinning on, her delicate hands, keeping control.

      I feel a slap in my forehead,
    then a punch by the cheek,
    then a slam on my back,
    and a kick in the knee.

    Reason, reason compelled me!
    Reason said it was so,
    to understand a woman,
    you have to let go of reason and thought.

    So we forgot the real meaning,
    of the things she had to say,
    because I focused on being reasonable,
    the worst trait in such affairs.

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